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Laying outside on the old green hammock, I hear the soft rustle of the tree near by. Listening as the cool, crisp wind flows through the branches and the leaves, making the sound of a soft, silent rain. My eyes slightly close as if sung to sleep by the sounds of nature. By the songs of the birds, and the breeze of the wind, I lay on the hammock asleep. Dreams of raindrops falling from blackened clouds, the whistle of a cooling breeze, and birds singing silently as they hide among the soakened leaves. Then the light blue skies, the golden rays of the warm sun, drops of water falling from the trees and dropping upon the wet grass, and birds flying high in the sky. I wake slowly, but still hearing the rustle of the trees and the whistle of the wind, and imaginating the soft, silent rain.
©2004-2009 ~chit007
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I was outside in Minnesota and it was a decent day out. ( thank God! Finally some good weather there ) I was actually in the hammock outside and near a tree that made a soft noise like rain, and started writing this. So, some of this is real, the whole sleeping and dreaming part wasn't true. (I didn't fall asleep.)

Enjoy!!

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:iconblack-soul:
beautiful work! I really love your use of words, excellent poetry, you have the heart of a poet! :)

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:blackrose: you are free to sever the chains of fate that bind you
:iconchit007:
THank you!

You are so nice!

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:skullbones:The fear of death is worse than death itself.:skullbones:

Heaven is a dream. Hell is home.
:iconblack-soul:
np! yur welcome, yur art deserves it :hug:

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:blackrose: you are free to sever the chains of fate that bind you
:iconchit007:
THank you!

:aww:

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:skullbones:The fear of death is worse than death itself.:skullbones:

Heaven is a dream. Hell is home.
:iconykcul701:
awesome, as usual.

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i :heart: my :camera:
:iconchit007:
Thanks!:hug:

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:skullbones:The fear of death is worse than death itself.:skullbones:

Heaven is a dream. Hell is home.

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